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Disciplined pg27

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Alright... I know my last update was in the summer... so try not to kill me because I have a very good reason; I was without a laptop. So imagine my pain of wanting to update and completely crippled to do so. Now, over the many months of doing nothing but plotting this story and such, I had some time to decide I hated the original pg27. Now the weight of its context is spread across 4 new pages. Yes FOUR pages! Updated all together no less. You guys definitely deserve a reward for sticking it out this long. So enjoy the commentary and a little smut... Llama Emoji-10 (Shy) [V1] 
 

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Shockwave: 'You had come alive once again just at the sight of 'Longarm', but my illusion will forever be shattered, and your memory of us together will now be tainted...'
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Fairydust07's avatar

I love this page. It's dark and sad, but it perfectly fits the dialogue and reflects how Bee's likely feeling at having this possibly centuries long lie exposed at the absolute WORST of times.


That's just my take on it, though.